Resolved Question: How does my resume look.Please edit it if needed.I need opinions.I will give 10 points to the best answer?

23 January 2012, 3:29 am

I've searched long and hard on how to create a resume. I have just finished. Is there anything I should change,add,or remove? I really need opinions,thanks.Please do not be afraid to give me constructive criticism! My whole life,my parents have kept me under their wing.They were very controlling, gave me a hard time, forced me to work for THEIR business(which was a scam) I was always homeschooled & I was never allowed to get a job! I've moved out with my boyfriend (thank god) So far,I've only worked one job and had one volunteer experience I want a job to take care of myself & to show my boyfriend that I am a hard working person I'm 19 & he's 25 I plan to send my resume out to retail (that ones who require resumes), fast food places (to increase my chances & to get managers interested), & anywhere else! [Brianna Ramone] Career Focus: A responsible and dependable person with above average communication skills, ability to work well in a team environment or independently, eager to take on new challenges. ______________________________________… Strengths & Qualifications • High school graduate • Self-motivated, creative and possess excellent organizational skills • Excellent Multitasking Ability • Prodigious interpersonal and communication skills • Great reading and writing skills • Strong math skills • Ability to work in a Fast-paced work environment • Self-motivated, creative and possess excellent organizational skills • Knowledge of all major operating systems like Microsoft Windows, Microsoft Office and the Internet • Ability to perform tasks in a collaborative and consultative manner ______________________________________… Volunteer Experience Agua Fria Food Bank [Summer 2011] [Community Volunteer] • Distributing groceries to families & individuals in need • Pre-bagging groceries • Filling and stocking shelves ______________________________________… Work Experience [August 2011] to [Present] [Best Photo Network- Sports Photographer ] • Maintains great communication with potential & current clients • Adjusts apertures, shutter speeds, and camera focus • Independently Determines desired images and picture composition • Works in different sites under different circumstances to get right kind of image. • Maintains great communication with potential & current clients • Completes desired work in desirable amount of time ______________________________________… Education [July,2010] [California Virtual Academies-CAVA] [Simi Valley,Ca] ______________________________________… Additional Information •Willingness to work Nights,Weekends, & Holidays • Proficient with Microsoft Word, Excel, and PowerPoint, and Internet. • Administrator & Editor for an online & upcoming video sharing community . • Worked as a Baby Sitter for 2 families •Willingness to work Nights,Weekends, & Holidays So how does it look?please critique it. i do not want to pay anyone to do it for me i would love to hear opinions... Read More »